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She Waits Beside The Window Sill

She Waits Beside The Window SillShe waits beside the window sill and hopesher knight will crest the hill in bright array,his shining armor blazing like the sunto finally her shadowed fears allay.She...

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Hey Wanda. It's easy to tell what is on the minds of people today by their responses to a piece written in a classical style. Your comments echo many of those I've received from an assortment of...

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My pleasure, W.

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Dear Terry,Perhaps it's because I've read so many of your poemsthat I respond with more ever growing intensity as your pieces draw the reader to the inescapable DARK ending. As I am a lover of the old...

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Hey thanks, Susanne. I really enjoyed your generous thoughts.Yours,DarkClick on pic to see my newest book, "Of Beauty Lost II: how full my heart"or visit me at The Dark Dreamer's Lair

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Hey Ron. I keep thinking that any day now, someone is going to realize I'm a talentless hack and blow the whistle on me. lol. Guess, I'm just lucky so far. I appreciate the generous...

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Thanks again, m'lady. Coming from you makes it extra special for me.Your friend,TerryClick on pic to see my newest book, "Of Beauty Lost II: how full my heart"or visit me at The Dark Dreamer's Lair

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I love the title and was drawn in by it alone... the poem doesn't dissappoint. I like the timeline of events each verse portrays.dan

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Terry,I always enjoy the skill of your work.Annette

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Sad but soulful, Terry. With great feeling, which I find in all your poems. I love the style, and I like the word change at the end of each line. It is a most enjoyable poem.ShelbyMetric feet with...

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Thanks Dan. I'm grateful for your words.Yours,DarkClick on pic to see my newest book, "Of Beauty Lost II: how full my heart"or visit me at The Dark Dreamer's Lair

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Thanks Annette. I'm grateful for the forum you provide us here. Your support is great.Yours,DarkClick on pic to see my newest book, "Of Beauty Lost II: how full my heart"or visit me at The Dark...

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Thanks Shelby. I'm honored by your terrific reply. It made my morning.Yours,DarkClick on pic to see my newest book, "Of Beauty Lost II: how full my heart"or visit me at The Dark Dreamer's Lair

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Dear Terry,As each quatrain begins by her waiting the repetition adds such impact and her ultimate death such pathos that I think this one stands out as easily superior.It is interesting that our...

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Hey Ron, my friend. I'm grateful for the positive review. Thanks.Yours,DarkClick on pic to see my newest book, "Of Beauty Lost II: how full my heart"or visit me at The Dark Dreamer's Lair

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This is gorgeous, Dreamer :)The rhythm is perfect (of course)..and the wait is felt.The second I read this I said, "I have the perfect picture for this!" You know me and my pictures..lol.Enjoyed~~Alaura

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Ah thanks, Alaura. If you have a picture and the skill to add it to the poem, that would be great. Thanks again for your sweet reply.Yours, DarkClick on pic to see my newest book, "Of Beauty Lost II:...

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Beautuful and sad DarkDreamer, so reminiscent of what is happening in the world today.Regards,Maryse

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Ah, Maryse. I'm touched by your kind response. Thanks so much.YoursDarkClick on pic to see my newest book, "Of Beauty Lost II: how full my heart"or visit me at The Dark Dreamer's Lair

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Dark,That last line has to be one of the saddest I've read. Wonderful work. She hopes, prays, and weeps, yet death comes to all. What rides above it? Your poem answers this question: faith.An...

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